OU Assault Vest Hisuian Samurott

[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Ceaseless Edge
move 2: Razor Shell / Aqua Cutter
move 3: Aqua Jet / Sucker Punch
move 4: Knock Off / Flip Turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Sharpness
nature: Adamant
evs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spe
tera type: Poison

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Samurott is a Pokemon that, unlike other entry hazard setters, can offensively threaten teams while getting hazards up thanks to Sharpness-boosted Ceaseless Edge, allowing for more aggressive play and more opportunities to lay Spikes. Ceaseless Edge also lets it get Spikes up against Pokemon such as Hatterene and Taunt Deoxys-S. With Assault Vest, Hisuian Samurott is able to utilize its increased special bulk to check Pokemon like Heatran, Gholdengo, and Dragapult. Additionally, its decent defensive typing is useful for checking other threats like Weavile and Kingambit lacking Low Kick and Tera Blast Fairy. Razor Shell is generally the preferred Water-type STAB move due to its chance to lower Defense, but Aqua Cutter is a viable alternative due to it being non-contact and thus preventing chip damage from Rocky Helmet, which helps against Pokemon like Skarmory and Great Tusk. Aqua Jet gives Hisuian Samurott a priority move to pick off faster, weakened threats like Glimmora, Great Tusk, and Iron Boulder. Sucker Punch is another option for priority; it is not as reliable as Aqua Jet, but it is stronger and better at revenge killing Dragapult, Deoxys-S, and Raging Bolt. Knock Off punishes defensive Pokemon that can impede progress, removing items from foes such as Dondozo, Skarmory, and Primarina. Alternatively, Flip Turn can be used to preserve momentum and safely bring in threats like Iron Valiant and Ogerpon-W. 84 Speed EVs let Hisuian Samurott outspeed uninvested Gliscor; the leftover EVs are put into HP to increase its overall bulk. Tera Poison is used to remove its weaknesses to Fighting, Fairy, and Grass so it can take attacks from Pokemon like Zamazenta, Iron Valiant, and Serperior.

Assault Vest Hisuian Samurott fits best on entry hazard-stacking bulky offense teams that appreciate its offensive presence and ability to take special attacks. Gholdengo is an especially good teammate for Hisuian Samurott, since it blocks all hazard removal bar Court Change from Cinderace and has good matchups against Fairy- and Fighting-types that annoy Hisuian Samurott like Clefable and Zamazenta. In return, Hisuian Samurott soft checks Heatran and Volcarona lacking Bug Buzz and Giga Drain. Due to Hisuian Samurott's lack of reliable recovery, pairing it with Pokemon that have titanic special bulk or high longevity like Ting-Lu or Galarian Slowking is encouraged to cover special threats throughout the course of a game. Ting-Lu also has access to Stealth Rock, which, when paired with Spikes and Hisuian Samurott's ability to remove Heavy-Duty Boots, can rack up serious chip damage on the opposing team. Alternative Knock Off users such as Great Tusk, Rillaboom, and Clefable are good for removing Heavy-Duty Boots from Pokemon that never come in against Hisuian Samurott like Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and opposing Great Tusk. On top of being a premier pick for bulky offense teams, Great Tusk has the added perk of having access to Rapid Spin, removing hazards the opponent tries to set up so Hisuian Samurott can win the hazard war. Additionally, Rillaboom is able to provide Hisuian Samurott passive recovery thanks to Grassy Terrain. Volcarona is another valuable teammate for Hisuian Samurott, as it really appreciates its checks like Heatran, Primarina, and Raging Bolt getting chipped by Spikes repeatedly; in return, Volcarona is able to handle the Fairy- and Grass- types that give Hisuian Samurott a hard time, mainly Iron Valiant and Rillaboom. Other offensive teammates that appreciate Hisuian Samurott's ability to set Spikes include, but are not limited to, Kingambit, Kyurem, and Ogerpon-W.

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[SET]
name: Samurott-Hisui
move 1: Ceaseless Edge
move 2: Razor Shell / Aqua Cutter
move 3: Aqua Jet / Sucker Punch
move 4: Knock Off / Flip Turn
item: Assault Vest
tera type: Poison
ability: Sharpness
nature: Adamant
evs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Samurott is a Pokemon who fills a unique position in this metagame. Unlike other hazard setters, Hisuian Samurott can offensively threaten teams while getting hazards up due to Sharpness-boosted Ceaseless Edge damaging the foe while also setting Spikes on the field, allowing for more aggressive play and opportunities to get Spikes up (explain how unlike other setters it can set up hazards vs hatt / taunt deo). With Assault Vest, Hisuian Samurott is able to utilize its increased bulk and decent defensive typing to check Pokemon like Heatran, Gholdengo, Weavile, and Kingambit lacking Low Kick or Tera Blast Fairy (it can be pretty misleading cuz vest doesnt increase ur pdef. how about mentioning dragapult instead? if u wanna keep gambit/weav u can give it a brief mention next line saying its typing is also useful against those). Razor Shell is generally the preferred Water STAB of choice due to its chance to lower Defense, but Aqua Cutter is a viable alternative due to its increased critical hit chance, bypassing any Defense boosts from Pokemon like Corviknight, Great Tusk and Zamazenta. Aqua Jet gives Hisuian Samurott a priority move to pick off faster weakened threats like Glimmora, Great Tusk, and Iron Boulder. Sucker Punch is another option for priority, and although it is stronger, it is not as reliable due to only working when the foe clicks an attacking move, but works better at revenging Dragapult, Deoxys-S and Raging Bolt. Knock Off punishes defensive Pokemon who can impede progress, removing items from Pokemon such as Dondozo, Skarmory, and Primarina. On the flipside, Flip Turn can be used over it to preserve momentum and safely bring in threats like Raging Bolt and Dragapult (could also mention other setup sweepers here). 84 Speed EVs let Hisuian Samurott outspeed Gliscor, with the rest of the EVs not invested into Attack to be put into HP to increase its overall bulk. Tera Poison is used to remove its weaknesses to Fighting, Fairy, and Grass so it can take attacks from Pokemon like Zamazenta, Iron Valiant, and Serperior.

Hisuian Samurott fits best on hazard stacking bulky offense teams that appreciate its offensive presence and ability to take special attacks thanks to the Assault Vest it equips. Gholdengo (especially balloon) is an especially good teammate for it since it naturally blocks all hazard removal barring Court Change Cinderace, as well as having good matchups into Fairy and Fighting types that annoy it like Hatterene, Clefable, and Zamazenta. Hisuian Samurott provides Gholdengo a switch in to Heatran and Volcarona lacking Bug Buzz or Giga Drain, however it is not a long-term answer to these Pokemon because of its lack of reliable recovery, so pairing it with Pokemon like Galarian Slowking and Ting-Lu helps cover special threats throughout the course of a game (it feels like this line is ghold-based whereas the analysis is about hamu. i think just saying hamu soft-checks these threats is fine. focus more on hamu). One other trait Ting-Lu has aside from gargantuan special bulk is access to Stealth Rock, and when paired with Spikes and Hisuian Samurott's ability to remove Heavy-Duty Boots, can rack up serious chip on the opposing team. Alternative Knock Off users such as Clefable and Iron Treads are good for knocking Heavy-Duty Boots off of Pokemon that never come in on Hisuian Samurott like Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and Great Tusk. Iron Treads has a myriad of qualities that help Hisuian Samurott: Rapid Spin to remove hazards the foe tries to set up, VoltTurn support for Hisuian Samurott in the form of Volt Switch bringing it in safely, and its Ground / Steel typing making the Raging Bolt matchup a lot more bearable. (tusk is also a great spinner on bo. im honestly not a big fan of treads cuz its like, sets up rocks & dies & fails to do enough; moreso a rain pick than anything) Volcarona is another valuable teammate for Hisuian Samurott, as it really appreciates its checks like Heatran, Galarian Slowking, Primarina, and Raging Bolt getting chipped by Spikes after repeated switch ins, and in return Volcarona is able to handle the Fairy and Grass types that give Hisuian Samurott a hard time, mainly Iron Valiant and Rillaboom. (could also mention other offensive teammates. stuff like maybe kingambit kyurem etc that appreciate spikes)

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[SET]
name: Samurott-Hisui
move 1: Ceaseless Edge
move 2: Razor Shell / Aqua Cutter
move 3: Aqua Jet / Sucker Punch
move 4: Knock Off / Flip Turn
item: Assault Vest
tera type: Poison
ability: Sharpness
nature: Adamant
evs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Samurott is a Pokemon who fills a unique position in this metagame. (this is really vague - the first sentence should fully talk about what its niche is; this tells me nothing. would be worth either combining it with the next sentence and shortening or just cutting this whole sentence) Unlike other hazard setters, Hisuian Samurott can offensively threaten teams while getting hazards up due to Sharpness-boosted Ceaseless Edge damaging the foe while also setting Spikes on the field, (you've already said this) allowing for more aggressive play and opportunities to get Spikes up. Due to Ceaseless Edge being an attacking move, Hisuian Samurott is able to get Spikes up on Pokemon such as Hatterene and Taunt Deoxys-S. With Assault Vest, Hisuian Samurott is able to utilize its increased special bulk to check Pokemon like Heatran, Gholdengo, and Dragapult, and its decent defensive typing is useful for checking other threats like Weavile and Kingambit lacking Low Kick or Tera Blast Fairy. (this paragraph is out of order - talk about moves first always and then other stuff like items/abilities/teras etc. teh part about its typing can be moved to the top (to explain its niche) then the av line can be moved below he moves) Razor Shell is generally the preferred Water STAB of choice due to its chance to lower Defense, but Aqua Cutter is a viable alternative due to its increased critical hit chance, bypassing any Defense boosts from Pokemon like Corviknight, Great Tusk, and Zamazenta. (skarm > corv imo for relevance. aqua cut is also non contact which helps avoid hemlet chip, more notable than crits imo) Aqua Jet gives Hisuian Samurott a priority move to pick off faster weakened threats like Glimmora, Great Tusk, and Iron Boulder. Sucker Punch is another option for priority, and although it is stronger, it is not as reliable due to only working when the foe clicks an attacking move, (dex info - you don't need to explain what a move does, you can just say that it's less reliable. in general, dex info is describing what moves/items/abilities do, the type chart etc (stuff that can be found on the dex or google), which isn't necessary to explain) but works better at revenging Dragapult, Deoxys-S, and Raging Bolt. Knock Off punishes defensive Pokemon who can impede progress, removing items from Pokemon such as Dondozo, Skarmory, and Primarina. On the flipside, Flip Turn can be used over it to preserve momentum and safely bring in threats like Iron Valiant and Ogerpon-W. 84 Speed EVs let Hisuian Samurott outspeed Gliscor, with the rest of the EVs not invested into Attack (no need to explain max attack) to be put into HP to increase its overall bulk. Tera Poison is used to remove its weaknesses to Fighting, Fairy, and Grass so it can take attacks from Pokemon like Zamazenta, Iron Valiant, and Serperior.

Hisuian Samurott fits best on hazard stacking bulky offense teams that appreciate its offensive presence and ability to take special attacks thanks to the Assault Vest it equips. Air Balloon Gholdengo (not just offensive ghold in general?) is an especially good teammate for it since it naturally blocks all hazard removal barring Court Change Cinderace, as well as having good matchups into Fairy and Fighting types that annoy it like Hatterene (i wouldnt call hatt something that annoys it too much because part of its niche is being able to spike in front of hatt. it also doesnt take too much from dkiss), Clefable, and Zamazenta. In return, Hisuian Samurott soft-checks Heatran and Volcarona lacking Bug Buzz or Giga Drain for Gholdengo. Due to its lack of reliable recovery, pairing it with Pokemon with titanic special bulk or longevity like Ting-Lu or Galarian Slowking is encouraged to cover special threats throughout the course of a game. One other trait Ting-Lu has aside from gargantuan special bulk is access to Stealth Rock, and when paired with Spikes and Hisuian Samurott's ability to remove Heavy-Duty Boots, can rack up serious chip on the opposing team. (rillaboom and terrain is also a good example of things that can help it with lack of recovery too - it can also knock) Alternative Knock Off users such as Clefable and Great Tusk are good for knocking Heavy-Duty Boots off of Pokemon that never come in on Hisuian Samurott like Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and opposing Great Tusk. On top of being a premier pick for bulky offense teams, Great Tusk has the added perk of access to Rapid Spin, removing hazards the foe tries to set up so Hisuian Samurott can win the hazard exchange. Volcarona is another valuable teammate for Hisuian Samurott, as it really appreciates its checks like Heatran, Galarian Slowking, Primarina, and Raging Bolt getting chipped by Spikes after repeated switch ins (glowkings are all boots so it getting chipped by spikes isnt reliable especially when it can't stay in on any good knock mon), and in return Volcarona is able to handle the Fairy and Grass types that give Hisuian Samurott a hard time, mainly Iron Valiant and Rillaboom. Other offensive teammates that appreciate Hisuian Samurott's ability to set Spikes include, but are not limited to, Kingambit, Kyurem, and Ogerpon-W.

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make sure to proofread this before gp - its Fairy-type not Fairy type, Fighting- and Fairy-types not Fighting and Fairy type
 

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[SET]
name: Samurott-Hisui Assault Vest
move 1: Ceaseless Edge
move 2: Razor Shell / Aqua Cutter
move 3: Aqua Jet / Sucker Punch
move 4: Knock Off / Flip Turn
item: Assault Vest
tera type: Poison
ability: Sharpness
nature: Adamant
evs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spe
tera type: Poison

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Samurott is a Pokemon who that, unlike other hazard setters, can offensively threaten teams while getting hazards up due to Sharpness-boosted Ceaseless Edge damaging the foe (obvious), allowing for more aggressive play and opportunities to get Spikes up. Its decent defensive typing in Water / Dark (dex info) is useful for checking other threats like Weavile and Kingambit lacking Low Kick or Tera Blast Fairy. Due to Ceaseless Edge being an attacking move, Hisuian Samurott is able to get Spikes up on against Pokemon such as Hatterene and Taunt Deoxys-S. Razor Shell is generally the preferred Water STAB of choice (redundant) due to its chance to lower Defense, but Aqua Cutter is a viable alternative due to it being non-contact and thus preventing chip damage from Rocky Helmet, which helps against Pokemon like Skarmory and Great Tusk. Aqua Jet gives Hisuian Samurott a priority move to pick off faster weakened threats like Glimmora, Great Tusk, and Iron Boulder. Sucker Punch is another option for priority; (ASC) , and although it is stronger, it is not as reliable, but works better at revenging Dragapult, Deoxys-S, and Raging Bolt it is not as reliable as Aqua Jet, but it is stronger and better at revenge killing Dragapult, Deoxys-S, and Raging Bolt. Knock Off punishes defensive Pokemon who that can impede progress, removing items from Pokemon such as Dondozo, Skarmory, and Primarina. On the flipside Alternatively (I appreciate the pun but this isn't a correct use of flipside), Flip Turn can be used over it to preserve momentum and safely bring in threats like Iron Valiant and Ogerpon-W. With Assault Vest, Hisuian Samurott is able to utilize its increased special bulk to check Pokemon like Heatran, Gholdengo, and Dragapult (move this near to the top of the paragraph; it's the basis of the set). 84 Speed EVs let Hisuian Samurott outspeed uninvested Gliscor; (ASC) , (RC) with the rest of the EVs to be are put into HP and Attack to increase its overall bulk and maximize power (presumably. Changed because the rest of the EVs aren't just put in HP). Tera Poison is used to remove its weaknesses to Fighting, Fairy, and Grass so it can take attacks from Pokemon like Zamazenta, Iron Valiant, and Serperior.

Assault Vest Hisuian Samurott fits best on entry hazard stacking hazard-stacking bulky offense teams that appreciate its offensive presence and ability to take special attacks thanks to the Assault Vest it equips. Gholdengo is an especially good teammate for it Hisuian Samurott since it naturally blocks all hazard removal barring bar Court Change Cinderace, as well as having good matchups into against Fairy- and Fighting-(RS)types that annoy it Hisuian Samurott like Clefable and Zamazenta. In return, Hisuian Samurott soft-checks soft checks Heatran and Volcarona lacking Bug Buzz or Giga Drain for Gholdengo. Due to its lack of reliable recovery, pairing it Hisuian Samurott with Pokemon with titanic special bulk or high (presumably. All Pokemon have some form of longevity) longevity like Ting-Lu or Galarian Slowking is encouraged to cover special threats throughout the course of a game. One other trait Ting-Lu has aside from gargantuan special bulk is access to Stealth Rock; (ASC) , and when paired with Spikes and Hisuian Samurott's ability to remove Heavy-Duty Boots, this can rack up serious chip damage on the opposing team. Alternative Knock Off users such as Rillaboom, Clefable, and Great Tusk Great Tusk, Rillaboom, and Clefable (rearranged to make it parallel with following further explanation of Tusk and Rilla) are good for knocking removing Heavy-Duty Boots off of from Pokemon that never come in on against Hisuian Samurott like Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and opposing Great Tusk. On top of being a premier pick for bulky offense teams, Great Tusk has the added perk of access to Rapid Spin, removing hazards the foe opponent tries to set up so Hisuian Samurott can win the hazard exchange (war?). (AP) , and Rillaboom is able to provide Hisuian Samurott passive recovery thanks to its the Grassy Terrain it provides. Volcarona is another valuable teammate for Hisuian Samurott, as it really appreciates its checks like Heatran, Primarina, and Raging Bolt getting chipped by Spikes after repeated switch ins repeatedly switching in; (ASC) , and in return Volcarona is able to handle the Fairy- and Grass- types that give Hisuian Samurott a hard time, mainly Iron Valiant and Rillaboom. Other offensive teammates that appreciate Hisuian Samurott's ability to set Spikes include, but are not limited to, Kingambit, Kyurem, and Ogerpon-W.

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[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Ceaseless Edge
move 2: Razor Shell / Aqua Cutter
move 3: Aqua Jet / Sucker Punch
move 4: Knock Off / Flip Turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Sharpness
nature: Adamant
evs: 172 HP / 252 Atk / 84 Spe
tera type: Poison

[SET COMMENTS]
Hisuian Samurott is a Pokemon that, unlike other entry hazard setters, can offensively threaten teams while getting hazards up due thanks to Sharpness-boosted Ceaseless Edge, allowing for more aggressive play and more opportunities to get Spikes up lay Spikes. Ceasless Edge also lets it get Spikes up against Pokemon such as Hatterene and Taunt Deoxys-S. (this sentence feels less out of place here, as you talk about it laying hazards in the previous sentence) With Assault Vest, Hisuian Samurott is able to utilize its increased special bulk to check Pokemon like Heatran, Gholdengo, and Dragapult. Its Additionally, its decent defensive typing is useful for checking other threats like Weavile and Kingambit lacking Low Kick or and Tera Blast Fairy. Due to Ceaseless Edge being an attacking move, Hisuian Samurott is able to get Spikes up against Pokemon such as Hatterene and Taunt Deoxys-S. Razor Shell is generally the preferred Water STAB Water-type STAB move due to its chance to lower Defense, but Aqua Cutter is a viable alternative due to it being non-contact and thus preventing chip damage from Rocky Helmet, which helps against Pokemon like Skarmory and Great Tusk. Aqua Jet gives Hisuian Samurott a priority move to pick off faster, (comma) weakened threats like Glimmora, Great Tusk, and Iron Boulder. Sucker Punch is another option for priority; it is not as reliable as Aqua Jet, but it is stronger and better at revenge killing Dragapult, Deoxys-S, and Raging Bolt. Knock Off punishes defensive Pokemon that can impede progress, removing items from Pokemon foes such as Dondozo, Skarmory, and Primarina. Alternatively, Flip Turn can be used to preserve momentum and safely bring in threats like Iron Valiant and Ogerpon-W. 84 Speed EVs let Hisuian Samurott outspeed uninvested Gliscor; the rest of the leftover EVs are put into HP and Attack to increase its overall bulk and maximize power. (you can re-remove the information about Attack EVs) Tera Poison is used to remove its weaknesses to Fighting, Fairy, and Grass so it can take attacks from Pokemon like Zamazenta, Iron Valiant, and Serperior.

Assault Vest Hisuian Samurott fits best on entry hazard-stacking bulky offense teams that appreciate its offensive presence and ability to take special attacks. Gholdengo is an especially good teammate for Hisuian Samurott, (comma) since it naturally blocks all hazard removal bar Court Change from Cinderace, (comma) as well as having and has good matchups against Fairy- and Fighting-types that annoy Hisuian Samurott like Clefable and Zamazenta. In return, Hisuian Samurott soft checks Heatran and Volcarona lacking Bug Buzz or and Giga Drain for Gholdengo. Due to its Hisuian Samurott's lack of reliable recovery, pairing Hisuian Samurott it with Pokemon with that have titanic special bulk or high longevity like Ting-Lu or and Galarian Slowking is encouraged to cover special threats throughout the course of a game. One other trait Ting-Lu has aside from gargantuan special bulk is Ting-Lu also has access to Stealth Rock; Rock, which, when paired with Spikes and Hisuian Samurott's ability to remove Heavy-Duty Boots, this can rack up serious chip damage on the opposing team. Alternative Knock Off users such as Great Tusk, Rillaboom, and Clefable are good for removing Heavy-Duty Boots from Pokemon that never come in against Hisuian Samurott like Galarian Slowking, Gholdengo, and opposing Great Tusk. On top of being a premier pick for bulky offense teams, Great Tusk has the added perk of having access to Rapid Spin, removing hazards the opponent tries to set up so Hisuian Samurott can win the hazard war. Additionally, Rillaboom is able to provide Hisuian Samurott passive recovery thanks to the Grassy Terrain it provides. Volcarona is another valuable teammate for Hisuian Samurott, as it really appreciates its checks like Heatran, Primarina, and Raging Bolt getting chipped by Spikes after repeatedly switching in; in return, (comma) Volcarona is able to handle the Fairy- and Grass- types that give Hisuian Samurott a hard time, mainly Iron Valiant and Rillaboom. Other offensive teammates that appreciate Hisuian Samurott's ability to set Spikes include, but are not limited to, Kingambit, Kyurem, and Ogerpon-W.

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- "unlike other hazard setters" - you caught this in the second paragraph, but the first mention of "entry hazards" in a paragraph mustn't be shortened to "hazards".
- "lacking Low Kick or Tera Blast Fairy" - this is referring to Pokemon that have neither move, so "or" should be replaced with "and".
- "preferred Water STAB" - "STAB" shouldn't be used as a noun; replace it with "STAB move", "STAB attack", or something along those lines.
- Adding the information about the Attack EVs was reintroducing dex info that was actually remove during QC. Changing "the rest of the" to "the leftover" fixes your nitpick without doing this.
- "[Gholdengo is a] good teammate for Hisuian Samurott since" - when "since" means "because", it should be preceded by a comma.
- "blocks all hazard removal bar Court Change Cinderace" - Cinderace itself isn't the hazard removal, so there should be a "from" before it. Changing barring to bar also wan't necessary; they mean the same thing in this context.
- "Rillaboom is able to provide (...) thanks to the Grassy Terrain it provides" - leaving it at "thanks to Grassy Terrain" would've been fine and avoided repetition.

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