National Dex Monotype Good sale (Poison) [QC: 2/2] [GP: 1/1]

[Pengairxan]

[SET]
Muk-Alola @ Assault Vest
Name: Assault Vest (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 248 HP / 12 Def / 248 SpD
Careful Nature
- Knock Off
- Poison Jab
- Pursuit
- Drain Punch / Shadow Sneak / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Assault Vest Alolan Muk finds a pivotal role on Poison teams, with its high special bulk and secondary Dark typing providing a much-needed immunity to Psychic-type attacks. Knock Off provides a strong STAB option with immense utility by removing held items. Poison Jab is Alolan Muk's most consistent STAB move, being able to reliably spread poison and make progress thanks to Poison Touch. Pursuit is used to trap Choice-locked threats like Hisuian Zoroark, Greninja, and Tapu Lele for solid damage. For Alolan Muk's final moveslot, Drain Punch provides some much-needed recovery and hits Steel- and Dark-type threats like Heatran and Hydreigon for solid damage. Alternatively, Shadow Sneak can allow Alolan Muk to pick off weakened threats, while Rock Slide checks Volcarona and Mega Charizard Y. The EV spread maximizes Alolan Muk's special bulk, with the 12 Defense EVs allowing it to survive an unboosted Victini's V-create after Stealth Rock. Crobat complements Alolan Muk thanks to its secondary Flying typing, which can support Alolan Muk against threats like Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Mega Gallade. Mega Venusuar helps Alolan Muk by dealing with Water- and Ground-type threats including Barraskewda , Mega Swampert, and Mamoswine. Galarian Slowking pairs with Alolan Muk to create a specially defensive core by handling threats such Choice Specs Latios, Tornadus-T, and Kyurem. Toxapex handles powerful physical threats like Kleavor, Mega Lopunny, and Weavile and has Z-Haze for special attackers that can overwhelm Alolan Muk like Kommo-o. Choice Scarf Sneasler can remove threats to Alolan Muk such as Excadrill, Hisuian Arcanine, and non-Choice Scarf Iron Boulder with its powerful Close Combat. Nidoking can remove walls that can sit on Alolan Muk, including Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight, thanks to its strong coverage moves.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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Grammar checked by:
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[Neko]

myuk

[SET]
Muk-Alola @ Assault Vest
Name: Assault Vest (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 248 HP / 12 Def / 248 SpD
Careful Nature
- Knock Off
- Poison Jab
- Pursuit
- Drain Punch / Shadow Sneak / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
(mention AssVest here since we're strongly considering having Protect Sludge A.Muk too soon >:3) Alolan Muk finds a pivotal role on Poison teams thanks to its secondary Dark typing providing much needed immunity into Psychic-type attacks. Knock Off is the primary Dark STAB of choice providing immense utility by removing held items along with hitting Ghost- and Psychic-type threats like Gholdengo, Blacephalon, Galarian Slowking, and Deoxys-S (unneeded because its STAB, tho you can mention that this+Jab ensures mukky always makes progress at least. Removed Jab's targets because of this reason too). Poison Jab is Alolan Muk's most consistent STAB option being able to reliably spread poison thanks to Poison Touch along with hitting Fairy-type threats such as Tapu Lele and Enamorus hard. Pursuit is used to trap choice locked threats like Hisuian Zoroark, Greninja, and Tapu Lele for solid damage. For its final moveslot Drain Punch provides some much needed recovery along with hitting Steel- and Dark-type threats like Heatran and Hydreigon for solid damage. Alternatively, Shadow Sneak can allow Alolan Muk to pick off weakened threats while Rock Slide provides utility in checking Volcarona and Mega Charizard-Y.
*Mention why 12 Def (its for Victini after SR iirc)

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Crobat compliments Alolan Muk by creating an immunity core thanks to its secondary Flying typing which can support Alolan Muk against threats like Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Mega Gallade. Mega Venusuar helps Alolan Muk by dealing with Water- and Ground-type threats including Barraskweda, Mega Swampert, and Mamoswine. Slowking Galar pairs with Alolan Muk to create a specially defensive backbone assisting Alolan Muk by handling threats such Rotom-Wash (specs Latios?), Tornadus-T, and Kyurem defensive Zapdos. Toxapex handles powerful physical threats like Kleavor, Mega Lopunny, and Weavile (has Z-haze too for spattackers like Z-komm that Muk loses to). Sneasler can remove threats to Alolan Muk such as Excadrill, Hisuian Arcanine, and Ursaluna (non choice Iron Boulder?) with its powerful Close Combat. Nidoking can remove opposing walls who can sit on Alolan Muk including Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight thanks to its strong coverage.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality Checked by:
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Grammar Checked by:
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QC 1/2, thank you Pengairxan >:3

 

[boomp]

2/2

[SET]
Muk-Alola @ Assault Vest
Name: Assault Vest (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 248 HP / 12 Def / 248 SpD
Careful Nature
- Knock Off
- Poison Jab
- Pursuit
- Drain Punch / Shadow Sneak / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Assault Vest Alolan Muk finds a pivotal role on Poison teams with its high special bulk and secondary Dark typing providing much needed immunity into Psychic-type attacks. [You can also mention in the opening sentence that its ability to trap foes with pursuit is another key reason why its a great role as well.] Knock Off is the primary Dark STAB of choice providing a strong option with immense utility by removing held items. Poison Jab is Alolan Muk's most consistent STAB option being able to reliably spread poison thanks to Poison Touch to make progress. Pursuit is used to trap choice locked threats like Hisuian Zoroark, Greninja, and Tapu Lele for solid damage. For its final moveslot Drain Punch provides some much needed recovery along with hitting Steel- and Dark-type threats like Heatran and Hydreigon for solid damage. Alternatively, Shadow Sneak can allow Alolan Muk to pick off weakened threats while Rock Slide provides utility in checking Volcarona and Mega Charizard-Y. The EV Spread maximums Alolan Muk's special bulk with 12 Defense EVs to survive a unboosted Victini's V-create after Stealth Rock.

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Crobat compliments Alolan Muk by creating an immunity core thanks to its secondary Flying typing which can support Alolan Muk against threats like Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Mega Gallade. Mega Venusuar helps Alolan Muk by dealing with Water- and Ground-type threats including Barraskweda, Mega Swampert, and Mamoswine. Galarian Slowking Slowking Galar pairs with Alolan Muk to create a specially defensive core backbone assisting Alolan Muk by handling threats such Choice sSpecs Latios, Tornadus-T, and Kyurem. Toxapex handles powerful physical threats like Kleavor, Mega Lopunny, and Weavile along with access to Z-haze for Special attackers that could overwhelm Alolan Muk like Kommo-oO. Choice Scarf Sneasler can remove threats to Alolan Muk such as Excadrill, Hisuian Arcanine, and non Choice Scarf Iron Boulder with its powerful Close Combat. Nidoking can remove opposing walls who can sit on Alolan Muk including Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight thanks to its strong coverage.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality Checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
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Grammar Checked by:
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QC 2/2 well done.

 

[Pengairxan]

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[SET]
Muk-Alola @ Assault Vest
Name: Assault Vest (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 248 HP / 12 Def / 248 SpD
Careful Nature
- Knock Off
- Poison Jab
- Pursuit
- Drain Punch / Shadow Sneak / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Assault Vest Alolan Muk finds a pivotal role on Poison teams,(comma) with its high special bulk and secondary Dark typing providing much needed immunity into against Psychic-type attacks. Knock Off is the primary Dark STAB of choice providing provides a strong STAB option with immense utility by removing held items. Poison Jab is Alolan Muk's most consistent STAB move option,(comma) being able to reliably spread poison and make progress thanks to Poison Touch to make progress. Pursuit is used to trap choice locked Choice-locked threats like Hisuian Zoroark, Greninja, and Tapu Lele for solid damage. For its final moveslot,(comma) Drain Punch provides some much needed recovery along with hitting and hits Steel- and Dark-type threats like Heatran and Hydreigon for solid damage. Alternatively, Shadow Sneak can allow Alolan Muk to pick off weakened threats,(comma) while Rock Slide provides utility in checking Volcarona and Mega Charizard-Y(remove hyphen). The EV Spread maximizes maximums Alolan Muk's special bulk,(comma) with the 12 Defense EVs allowing it to survive an unboosted Victini's V-create after Stealth Rock.

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Crobat compliments complements Alolan Muk by creating an immunity core thanks to its secondary Flying typing,(comma) which can support Alolan Muk it against threats like Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Mega Gallade. Mega Venusuar helps Alolan Muk by dealing with Water- and Ground-type threats, (comma) which includes Barraskewda including Barraskweda, Mega Swampert, and Mamoswine. Galarian Slowking pairs with Alolan Muk to create a specially defensive core by handling threats such Choice Specs Latios, Tornadus-T, and Kyurem. Toxapex handles powerful physical threats like Kleavor, Mega Lopunny, and Weavile and has along with access to Z-Haze Z-haze for Special special attackers that could overwhelm Alolan Muk like Kommo-o. Choice Scarf Sneasler can remove threats to Alolan Muk such as Excadrill, Hisuian Arcanine, and non-Choice(add hyphen) Scarf Iron Boulder with its powerful Close Combat. Nidoking can remove opposing walls who that can sit on Alolan Muk,(comma) including Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight,(comma) thanks to its strong coverage moves.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality checked by Checked:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
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Amateurishly Implemented.

 

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[SET]
Muk-Alola @ Assault Vest
Name: Assault Vest (Poison)
Ability: Poison Touch
EVs: 248 HP / 12 Def / 248 SpD
Careful Nature
- Knock Off
- Poison Jab
- Pursuit
- Drain Punch / Shadow Sneak / Rock Slide

[SET COMMENTS]
Assault Vest Alolan Muk finds a pivotal role on Poison teams,(comma) with its high special bulk and secondary Dark typing providing much needed a much-needed immunity into to Psychic-type attacks. Knock Off is the primary Dark STAB of choice providing provides a strong STAB option with immense utility by removing held items. Poison Jab is Alolan Muk's most consistent STAB move option,(comma) being able to reliably spread poison and make progress thanks to Poison Touch to make progress. Pursuit is used to trap choice locked Choice-locked threats like Hisuian Zoroark, Greninja, and Tapu Lele for solid damage. For its Alolan Muk's final moveslot,(comma) Drain Punch provides some much needed much-needed recovery along with hitting and hits Steel- and Dark-type threats like Heatran and Hydreigon for solid damage. Alternatively, Shadow Sneak can allow Alolan Muk to pick off weakened threats,(comma) while Rock Slide provides utility in checking checks Volcarona and Mega Charizard-Y(remove hyphen). The EV Spread maximums spread maximizes Alolan Muk's special bulk,(comma) with the 12 Defense EVs allowing it to survive an unboosted Victini's V-create after Stealth Rock.

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Crobat compliments complements Alolan Muk by creating an immunity core thanks to its secondary Flying typing,(comma) which can support Alolan Muk against threats like Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Mega Gallade. Mega Venusuar helps Alolan Muk by dealing with Water- and Ground-type threats including Barraskweda Barraskewda, Mega Swampert, and Mamoswine. Galarian Slowking pairs with Alolan Muk to create a specially defensive core by handling threats such Choice Specs Latios, Tornadus-T, and Kyurem. Toxapex handles powerful physical threats like Kleavor, Mega Lopunny, and Weavile along with access to Z-haze for Special and has Z-Haze for special attackers that could can overwhelm Alolan Muk like Kommo-o. Choice Scarf Sneasler can remove threats to Alolan Muk such as Excadrill, Hisuian Arcanine, and non-Choice(add hyphen) Scarf Iron Boulder with its powerful Close Combat. Nidoking can remove opposing walls who that can sit on Alolan Muk,(comma) including Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight,(comma) thanks to its strong coverage moves.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality checked by Checked:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Grammar checked by Checked:
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AM Check Feedback

- "Much-needed" is hyphenated.
- The "spread" in "EV spread" is not hyphenated.
- Rewording the bit about the examples that include Bararskewda wasn't particularly necessary.
- The "it" you added to the first teammates sentence was ambiguous.

1/1 GP Team done
Credit adorluigi too

 

[Rose]

"Mega Venusuar helps Alolan Muk by dealing with Water- and Ground-type threats including Barraskweda, Mega Swampert, and Mamoswine." -> also change "Barraskweda" to "Barraskewda", sorry.