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I don't want to make another "Go get logs" post, so if you can in your spare time, could you please post several non cherry picked logs on your SubPass Gliscor thread?
I only give copy-pastable checks if we are in a hurry to get something on-site [like a Smog article, for instance]. Manually making my changes also makes it easier for you to remember what mistakes you should avoid next time you write an analysis. It's not like I made that many changes, either - it will hardly take you 10 minutes to make the changes. Sorry if I sound harsh :D