CAP 5 CAP 5 - Part 14b (Pokedex Entry Poll 1)

[Objection]

3, 7 and 40.

Also, number 3 should say STRATAGEM'S peculiar shape

And there's no a in experiences.

 

[Genesis of Oblivion]

3,4,20

 

[Gryoine]

3, 6, 4.

 

[PapaCAP]

3, 6, 23

 

[Goodbar]

16 needs the word "they're" changed to "their". It also should probably have the word "these" changed to "those" -- but that's not a misspelling, it's just a style thing.

Bah you're right (including these to those), thanks for pointing that out, I always think it's a lot more stupid when you use they're wrong lol...

 

[Legacy Raider]

3, 7, 12

 

[Bungalow Bill]

3, 31, 41

 

[sub.torterra]

3.

18.

 

[Infiltrator]

2,3,7.

 

[Metallic]

3, 12, 7

 

[Ninja Dood]

3,15,22

These just sound so sick.

 

[Master of Llamas]

3,6,11

 

[Hypnotist]

I like:

3, 14, and 40

 

[Elevator Music]

3, 7, 16

 

[Kamen Rider]

3 16 18

 

[Nasty Pass]

3, 4, 23

 

[petrie911]

3, 6, 22

I think 22 might sound a bit better if it read

STRATEGEM's ability to levitate lets it easily navigate steep mountain slopes in order to chase down swarms of SYCLANT.

instead of

The levitational abilities of STRATAGEM enable them to easily navigate steep mountain slopes in order to chase down swarms of SYCLANT.

 

[Dragonknight!]

..i think 3 is winning..

 

[Fishin]

11, 23, 27

 

[Plus]

3, 11, 41

 

[Yamaha]

3, 27, 31

 

[tennisace]

This ends tomorrow at noonish.

 

[Time Mage]

3, 19, 31.

I like 3 specially.

 

[SgtWoodsy]

3, 29, 31.

 

[Vinyacoire]

11, 12, 44