!Cyzir, I hate to say this, but I still feel like the perspective on the legs is a little off. Like, they're too far apart horizontally, and not close enough together depthwise. Does anybody else feel this way?
Perhaps you could move the heads upwards? It seems like something is weird about its legs and head...Maybe not. I'm not the artistic one, so I wouldn't know.!
Well damn. Indeed it is off perspective-wise. Though the forelegs are supposed to be that far apart, the back legs weren't. I've made adjustments accordingly. Does this look any better?
It looks great, I wouldn't worry! This pose is beautiful too! ^_^ Perhaps keep the other color scheme as an alternate/shiny version.hey again. thanks for all the great feedback. i think most of the complaints were spot on, and that leaves me with this entry:
still a little robotic, i hope you can forgive me.
here's some of the other pics:
http://www.kodiakber.net/forumpost/cap8sketch.png
http://www.kodiakber.net/forumpost/cap8.png
and the full sized one:
http://www.kodiakber.net/forumpost/cap8b.png
good luck to one and all.
FINAL SUBMISSION
so Cyberzero knows that your all finished with you design you must type Final Submission (bold, like I have it) somewhere in you post. It's getting down to crunch time so most artists that aren';t done make a Final Submission post just to be safe. BTW I like the Gray-Blue.OK, I fixed the colors. Now that I think about it, it looked terrible. I like the grey one more than the others. By the way what's that Final Submission thing? Sorry, but I looked around the forum and the rules and I couldn't find it...
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/9486/electricc.png
If you don't like doing quadrupeds, why don't you just turn him into a biped?!
Well damn. Indeed it is off perspective-wise. Though the forelegs are supposed to be that far apart, the back legs weren't. I've made adjustments accordingly. Does this look any better?
Well I would, but it feels more natural to have it being a quadruped rather than a biped. Some depictions of the hydra are bipedal sure, but I prefer it having 4 legs. (Despite how much I dislike drawing them x_x)If you don't like doing quadrupeds, why don't you just turn him into a biped?
...Also, make sure you have a clear outline when you submit your final submission.
It's a nice concept and great artwork, well done.
Your outlines look fine, Cyzir.Well, I can make the thunder outlines darker but I doubt I'm changing it (or have enough time to...). After all, there IS already a clear outline for the yellow lightning parts. I made it a dark yellow orange color, which I felt was dark enough to distinguish the electricity without making it too dark. It's an effect also used by Rotom and Moltres' flames. It gives it a certain 'feel' solid black lines can't. Thanks though, I'll try and see if I can muster up a darker outline later today...
Oh F yeah!Final Submission
Explanation regarding abilities and stat spread:
The green skin on its body and mouth connected like a circuit act as capacitors, building up charge to act as a launch pad for special attacks, and also creating static electricity (static) which it uses to attract and control dust (shield dust) and makes its coat stand on end in sharp spikes. It's natural bulk and blubber allow it to absorb attacks with relative ease, however it's large size slows it down.
Supporting material:
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4281/wyvoltcapsupport2.jpg
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2200/capfinallineart.jpg
Hope you guys like my final version! I feel like it's kinda let down by the colouring, and im not sure what the general opinion on the circuit design will be (although i like it).