Rate my OU team

I'm not very good at making team, it's always some common pokémon that rips it apart. So.. please rate my team and help me make it better.
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Bronzong @ Leftovers
Sassy nature
252 HP / 152 Atk / 8 Def / 96 SpD
Ability: Levitate
- Stealth rock
- Hypnotis
- Gyro ball
- Lightscreen

This is my lead to set up some early rocks. It can also set up a light screen since I don't have a fat whore. Also get rid of mamoswine ;)


Celebi @ leftovers
Bold nature
252hp/220Def/36spe
Ability: Natural cure
- Grass knot
- Leech seed
- Recover
- Thunderwave

Kind of a physical wall, just have to watch out for strong ice attacks and especially bug-moves. I'm not sure wathever I should replace grass knot with psysic or not, but grass knot hurt stuff like swampert, gyarados and tyranitar more.. Leach seed is always annoying. Since my team is pretty slow, paralys-support is very nice


Mismagius @ leftovers
Timid nature
252spAtk/252speed/4hp
Ability: Levitate
- Shadow ball
- Hidden power fighting
- Calm mind
- Substitute


Mismagius can set up on every Blissey exept CMBliss so I like her.


Heracross @ Choice band
Adamant nature
104 HP / 248 Atk / 156 Spe
Ability: Guts
- Megahorn
- Close combat
- Stone edge
- Pursuit

Choiceband-Hera is pretty beastly. 574 attack with two 120 base power STAB move is defenetely not bad. Also enjoys Will-o-Wisps




Salamence @ Lum berry/leftovers
Adamant
120 HP / 252 Atk / 136 Spe
Ability: Intimidate
- Dragon dance
- Dragon claw
- EQ
- Fire blast/rock slide

Salamence has intimidate and pretty nice resistances so it can easily come in on something and set up a dragon dance. I'm not sure about item choice, but since I don't have a rapid spinner life orb is not very apealing.



Swampert @ Leftovers
Relaxed nature
240 HP / 216 Def / 52 SpA
Ability: Torrent
- EQ
- Ice beam
- Surf
- Roar

Phazer and Bulky water.


As a whole I think my team is a bit slow. And a infernape with life orb and hp ice, grass knot, flamethrower and nasty plot would completely rape it. So I obiosly need some help here =/
 
I'm not very good at making team, it's always some common pokémon that rips it apart. So.. please rate my team and help me make it better.
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Bronzong @ Leftovers
Sassy nature
252 HP / 152 Atk / 8 Def / 96 SpD
Ability: Levitate
- Stealth rock
- Hypnotis
- Gyro ball
- Lightscreen

Fine


Celebi @ leftovers
Bold nature
252hp/220Def/36spe
Ability: Natural cure
- Grass knot
- Leech seed
- Recover
- Thunderwave

If your using leech seed, tehn reomve recover and add in substitute. Also minimize the HP EVs and pump them into SAtk or Spd. Make the nature Timid. aromatherpay is a Nice support move which is viable over thunder wave.


Mismagius @ leftovers
Timid nature
252spAtk/252speed/4hp
Ability: Levitate
- Shadow ball
- Hidden power fighting
- Calm mind
- Substitute

Fine


Heracross @ Choice band
Adamant nature
104 HP / 248 Atk / 156 Spe
Ability: Guts
- Megahorn
- Close combat
- Stone edge
- Pursuit

You said your team was a bit slow, so Scarf would be a viable option here.




Salamence @ Lum berry/leftovers
Adamant
120 HP / 252 Atk / 136 Spe
Ability: Intimidate
- Dragon dance
- Dragon claw
- EQ
- Fire blast/rock slide

A mixed set would be quite viable here. YOu have a physical sweeper already in Hera, and a special in Mismagius, so a mixed would synergise nicley, and it can wreak havoc. Change the nature to Rash, and make the EVs 6 HP, 252 SAtk, 252 Spd, and change the set to Dragon Dance, Dragon Claw, Hydro Pump and Flamethrower. Provides Beastly coverage and can deal with physical walls along with blissey after DD or two. It also doesn't fear Burns much.


Swampert @ Leftovers
Relaxed nature
240 HP / 216 Def / 52 SpA
Ability: Torrent
- EQ
- Ice beam
- Surf
- Roar

Fine


As a whole I think my team is a bit slow. And a infernape with life orb and hp ice, grass knot, flamethrower and nasty plot would completely rape it. So I obiosly need some help here =/
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