Nat Dex Slowbro

[Avery]

Slowbro @ Colbur Berry
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 228 Def / 28 SpD
Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Ice Beam / Future Sight
- Body Press
- Teleport
- Slack Off

While Slowbro typically loses to Dark-types like Ash-Greninja and Weavile, with Colbur Berry + Body Press, Slowbro aims to flip the matchup on its head. With Colbur Berry, Slowbro can survive Choice Band Weavile's Knock Off and Choice Specs Ash-Greninja's Dark Pulse, hammering them in return with Body Press. Ice Beam lets Slowbro act as a sturdier answer to offensive Ground-types, particularly Swords Dance Gliscor and Garchomp. Ice Beam can be dropped in favor of Future Sight to enable dangerous wallbreakers like Mega Lopunny and Kartana. Slowbro's Teleport also allows it to bring in offensive threats such as Mega Medicham and Weavile freely. The given EV spread allows Slowbro to survive 2 Choice Specs Tapu Lele Psychics, which it can hold off in a pinch. Heatran in particular is a great teammate, as Slowbro can take on pesky Ground-types as well as lure Ash-Greninja, and in return, Heatran can pivot into Volcarona and Serperior for Slowbro.

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[dhelmise]

Avery get into qc pls

 

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Slowbro @ Colbur Berry
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 228 Def / 28 SpD
Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Ice Beam / Future Sight
- Body Press
- Teleport
- Slack Off

Colbur Berry + Body Press Slowbro aims to flip the matchup against opposing Weavile and Ash-Greninja on its head. Maybe this sentence can be structured as like "While it usually loses to dark types like... Colbur Berry + Body Press allow Slowbro to beat..."With Colbur Berry, Slowbro can survive Weavile's Choice Band Knock Off and Ash-Greninja's Choice Specs Dark Pulse, hammering them in return with Body Press. Ice Beam lets Slowbro act as a sturdier answer to offensive Ground-type Pokemon, particularly Swords Dance Gliscor and Garchomp. Ice Beam can be dropped in favor of Future Sight to enable dangerous breakers like Mega Lopunny and Urshifu-R nitpick but you could mention a more common pokemon here. The given EV spread allows Slowbro to survive 2 Choice Specs Tapu Lele Psychics, which it can hold off in a pinch. Heatran in particular is a great teammate, as Slowbro can take on pesky Ground-types as well as lure Ash-Greninja, and in return Heatran can pivot into Tapu Koko and Kartana There are terrible mentions, pls mention other mons that dont have a chance of 2hko/ohkoing Heatran for Slowbro. Maybe if there is room u cud drop a line about teleport

this is good

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Slowbro @ Colbur Berry
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 228 Def / 28 SpD
Relaxed Nature
IVs: 0 Atk / 0 Spe
- Ice Beam / Future Sight
- Body Press
- Teleport
- Slack Off

While Slowbro typically loses to Dark-types like Ash-Greninja and Weavile, with Colbur Berry + Body Press, Slowbro aims to flip the matchup on its head. With Colbur Berry, Slowbro can survive Choice Band Weavile's Choice Band Knock Off and Choice Specs Ash-Greninja's Choice Specs Dark Pulse, hammering them in return with Body Press. Ice Beam lets Slowbro act as a sturdier answer to offensive Ground-types Pokemon, particularly Swords Dance Gliscor and Garchomp. Ice Beam can be dropped in favor of Future Sight to enable dangerous wallbreakers like Mega Lopunny and Kartana. Slowbro's Teleport also allows it to bring in dangerous breakers frail, offensive threats (avoids repetition, if "frail" messes with your meaning, just do "offensive threats") such as Mega Medicham and Weavile freely. The given EV spread allows Slowbro to survive 2 Choice Specs Tapu Lele Psychics, which it can hold off in a pinch. Heatran in particular is a great teammate, as Slowbro can take on pesky Ground-types as well as lure Ash-Greninja, and in return, (add comma) Heatran can pivot into Volcarona and Serperior for Slowbro.

1/1, well written!

 

[deetah]